​Due to the change in the synopsis the final draft of the script also needed to be changed. Originally we planned for the girls to be discussing and planning a trip to Thorpe park however we felt that if no dialogue was used this will help set the scene and create a more depressive atmosphere. Therefore straight away have the audience feel sympathetic and emotive towards our victim.​ Also we cut out the ending conversation of the bullies apologising as we felt that this came to too much of a conclusion for a opening introduction. Below is the added script of what the bullies shout at the protagonist